Cam 17 Test 4 Writing Task 1
|The chart shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops opening in a country from 2011 to 2018.
The line chart provides a comprehensive overview of shop closures and openings in a particular nation over the period from 2011 to 2018.
It is evident that both figures experienced a decline, with openings exhibiting a more pronounced reduction. By the conclusion of the period, closures had become the more prevalent phenomenon.
In 2011, the country witnessed approximately 8,500 shop openings, a substantial figure in contrast to the 6,200 closures recorded during the same period. Over the subsequent years, openings underwent a fluctuating trajectory, decreasing to a minimum of 4,000 in 2012 before a partial recovery to 6,100 in 2014. Notably, closures demonstrated a more consistent pattern, reaching a zenith of 7,100 in 2013, nearly aligning with opening figures in 2014.
Following this juncture, closures experienced a plunge to a mere 600 in 2015, followed by a return to a high level of around 5,100 in 2016, concluding with an almost unaltered period from 2016 to 2018. In contrast, openings exhibited a more modest decline, hovering around 4,000 from 2015 to 2017, reaching a precise low of 3,000 in 2018.
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Cam 17 Test 4 Writing Task 2
Nowadays, an increasing number of people with health problems are using alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their normal doctor.
Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
In recent years, a growing number of unwell individuals have begun to adopt the use of alternative medicines and treatments. In my opinion, though these can sometimes be effective, this trend is negative overall due to the superiority of modern medicine.
Those who support alternative remedies argue there is historical evidence in favor of their effectiveness. A pertinent example of this would be the popularity of traditional Chinese medicine in Asia. Many of their medicines and treatments date back hundreds or even thousands of years. Over that time, they have been tested and their effect verified in some cases. Contemporary health researchers are often able to later identify the scientific rationale but it is possible there are remedies in use today that we still do not understand. This ignorance should not serve as a justification to question their overall importance.
However, the vast majority of viable medical treatment is modern. Scientists now understand more rigorously the underlying structures of cells, viruses, bacteria, cancers, and various other maladies. This has allowed for the creation of undeniably effective procedures such as surgery and the discovery of crucial medicines like penicillin. There is no doubt as to why these medicines work and therefore in the future they will only become more refined and safe. In contrast, traditional medicine may be effective for unknown reasons but its applicability is limited and it will not advance overtime.
In conclusion, with few exceptions, traditional medicine is a better alternative to less verifiable treatments and pharmaceuticals. Individuals can attempt to use them but should rely on their usual doctors.
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